2021.10.28 08:50 WingcommanderIV "Synesthesia" Screenplay [Urban Fantasy] [Action Adventure] [LGBT] [Strong Women]
Page Length: 130 pages
Genre: Urban Scifi/Fantasy, Action Adventure
Summary: A teenager suffers from Synesthesia granting her strange and wonderful powers that attract the attention of the government. She has to go on the run with her best friend and seek out a cure before its too late.
Feedback Concerns: Many people responded when I wrote my first script in forever, my vampire TV pilot that I released here. I was impressed at all the positive feedback, and you guys really convinced my family I might have what it takes. But I'm not sure I convinced you guys.
I dug up this screenplay I wrote in 2013 and hadn't touched in all that time, and tried applying some of the suggestions you guys gave me, such as breaking some of the big chunks of text and capitolizing words of emphasis. I'd love to get your opinions on it, I think for those calling my last work to slow but appreciated my dialogue, this is everything and more. It's action packed, well paced, fun, and has some cool dialogue. It even had some twists I wasn't expecting. I'm kinda mad I've been literally sitting on this script for 10 years, it's like my Magnum Opus. I believe I submitted it to a contest once in like 2014 and it got like 8th out of 750 people.
I'd love some opinions. Obviously it's not perfect -- but it might be the best thing I've written.
Thank you for anytime any of you choose to devote to this. I really hope to hear back from some of you, but I'm in no way trying to guilt you like I did last time. But I would appreciate all the opinions I can get.
Live Long and Prosper and May the Force be with you.
PS: The rest of my works can be found at 99geek.ca or Patreon.com/99geek
This actually shares a universe with the TV Pilot I posted last time.
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Ministerul Energiei are fonduri în PNRR pentru eficienţă energetică şi se lucrează la proiecte dedicate, a declarat, joi, la o dezbatere, ministrul interimar al Energiei, Virgil Popescu, subliniind că obiectivul esenţial al întregii economii este optimizarea costurilor, reduce...
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2021.10.28 08:50 pogogq Giant pile of freshly harvested sugar beets and a bored dachshund in Germany.
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2021.10.28 08:49 willinillililli Lookout tings
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2021.10.28 08:49 molten_dragon Michigan House votes to bar Airbnb bans
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hi every one i have a h310m S2H motherboard an ASUS RX470 4GB GPU And 16GB of memory and a pretty good case i wanted to know should i upgrade my pc for the upcoming games ? and if i should what should i upgrade ( im not a really wealthy guy so for example i cant upgrade my rx 470 to a 1080ti im broke AF :( )
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2021.10.28 08:49 entered_bubble_50 Am I shrinking? Or are clothes getting smaller?
I'm a 180 cm tall male, and weigh about 79kg, which puts me towards the higher end of a healthy weight, BMI-wise. I've always bought size "medium" clothes, but in the last couple of years I've had to switch to size small, since most new medium size clothes are comically baggy for me. So now the options I have seem to be jumpers with arms that are too short, or to look like an "after" photo in a weight watchers advert. Does anyone else have this problem?
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2021.10.28 08:49 A-Z123 Rain & Blood
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